All Comments on 'Nightmares Become Reality Ch. 06'

Most writers mess up with to and too, you managed to use two where too should be.

While she is in agony and in need of medical attention? Has he never seen a fucking pussy before? Is this his first time with a naked woman? Seriously, just because she's attractive and naked doesnt mean a guy would be aroused. I don't find a woman in pain to be a sexual turn on.

Complete left turn. Is this the same author that wrote the previous chapters?

Rape to seduction mode is a complete bone kill.

And still no one has discussed how to get rid of the ghost?