by PassionStJohn
YAY!!! I'm so glad you've continued the novella!! Thank you so much, Passion! You're a fantastic author with an incredible imagination! I can't wait for the next chapters!
This story is awesome! I cant wait until the next one in the seris comes out. You have a great imagination!
I love this story line, I hope you continue with it soon. Your stories are among some of the ones I love best on this website. Thank you for sharing your imagination with us.
I just can't get enough of this story. The characters are so real I just love it. Write fast!
I cannot wait until the next chapter - i cannot believe how caught up i am in Leah's story - i hope for more really soon
I LOVE your writing! I can't wait for the end of the series, please don't stop now! I check your profile everyday to see if you have added to this story.
This has to be one of the most amazing pieces of erotica I've ever had the pleasure of reading, but if you leave off now and don't finish the story I'm going to hunt you down and make you finish it myself :P
You cant stop!!! What happens to Ming? and the other girl? Whats the shoping icon for? Dont we get to see more of what happens to Burgur(is that how its spelled?) Most importantly what happens to Leah and Carlton?
I love your stories so much!! Please continue writting them I come each to see if you've put another chapter.
I love the characters and the way its evolving ... dying to know what happens next .... please hurry
I am intrigued and feel involved with this story. I was disappointed when I finished Ch 7 and discovered Ch 8 does not yet exist here. Your story held my interest and left me wanting more. I must admit I found myself identifying with Leah, imagining her emotions and state of mind. I eagerly await your future installments.
So at long last He admits in front of others that He loves her! Now the big question is will she learn to love her Master? Also Will Ming become His second slave? And what of the hitch-hiker?