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Mine Ch. 07

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous06/02/04

What happens next?

So when does Narissa stick a knife in this jackass' heart?

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by Anonymous06/02/04

no need for such violence!!

Im loving how the story is unfolding!! Keep up the good work. I know this story has to end at some point but I don't want it to.

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by ryu7706/02/04

I'm not a great fan

of BDSM type stories, but there are a few that I love...LIKE THIS ONE!

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by Anonymous06/02/04

Bad Taste

This isn't a BDSM story. This is a story about rape. Plain and simple. I don't think I have ever read a story that has discusted me as much as this one.

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by ladyalchemy06/02/04

Hmmm

I am likeing how this unfolds, but the suspence is killing me. :)

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by Anonymous06/02/04

Hmmm...

Well... not much I can say about this chapter. I guess there was a reason why I didnt't like the housekeeper. But anywho... I patiently await the next chapter. Keep up the good work.

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by Anonymous06/02/04

I think I'll delete this story's folder

While the writing is technically good, the story is less about sex than kidnapping, dominantion, and rape. For those that enjoy this kind of scene, enjoy. Not my cup of tea, thank you.

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by Anonymous06/03/04

Hurrrryyyy!

I like how the story is progressing. You are a talented writer. It would be nice if Narissa turned around and smacked Jake's sexy ass in the end, though.

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by Anonymous09/15/07

To hell with them!! Ur great

YOUR STORIES ARE SOOO GREAT!! GOSH I LOVE THEM!!! i dont want them to end!

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by Anonymous03/19/11

Downhill

Even for some of the more extreme BDSM/Nonconsent I've read, your main characters are unrealistic. Highly unlikely that someone as crazy as Jake would actually give Narissa pleasure. Also, what he does to her in this chapter would be excruciatingly painful after what he did to her in previous chapters.

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