All Comments on 'Mine Ch. 11'

I've loved this story from the beginning. And as much as Jake deserved losing her, I think they love each other too much to have it end with them apart.

this story has had me on the edge since day one, jake deserves everything he gets for what he did to narissa, i mean he treated her worse than a dog. i was glad 2 see him do the right thing and realease her. still, i wonder did this take a toll on him, not knowing the extinct of what he did to her. just please finish this story

While I do agree with the first comment that I have been on edge since the beginning of the story, and do feel as though Jake has treated her terribly, I don't feels as though Tim is right for her. I would like to see her back with Jake, assuming that he learned his lesson. Keep writing.

She's one horny little devil after she left Jake. Strange what love could do, make you tolerate every little thing an ass does. But I still held on to the hope that Jake would see reason, and even though he doesn't deserve her, he's come to care for her a great deal and had to deal with more demons of his own by letting her go. Now, he takes him a full-blown year to call her. About what, I'm anxious to know. Hurry up already! lol

Jake did the right thing to let her go (although I wished he would have break her in...LOL!)

Now I wonder what will happen with Jake back on the picture..Great Job!

I agree that Jake needed to let her go. I also agree that Tim is not the one for her. I want to see Jake and Narissa together also. I hope that while Narissa has grown up this past year Jake has to.

Did'nt see the scene between her and Tim coming. What's Jake going to say about that? And is Narissa going to tell him? She may want to hurt him as much as he hurt her, and nothing would kill him more than to know she had been with his best friend.

As much as I want to see Jake redeemed, I don't want him to change too much, because then you'd lose him as a character if you made him too nice...Jake is Jake, and arrogant ass who has a cord of niceness running through him.

Can't wait for the next chappie, thanks for updating so quick...

It?s such an addictive story, haven?t been able to put it down since chapter 1.

Please continue soon.

This chapter was amazing!! I've been reading the entire story in one sitting and can't believe how good it is. This chapter was so extremely hot!!!

I loved everythin about this chapter except that she did it with Tim. YUCK! He's Jake's friend! In spite of the BDSM, this story had a certain morality and purity to it until she slept with his friend! Well, let's see what comes next...