Well........... What a save! You turned it around.
Thanks for writing!
I csn't believe that a girl was savagely raped by her father, threatens to expose him, leaves him, and receives a letter from him on her birthday, and has a complete turnaround in her feelings, only to go back to him and want to fuck him more than anyting in the world. This is the most ridiculous story I have ever read on LIterotica.
I know it's supposed to be fantasy, but impossible would be closer to the truth.
I didnt like her sudden change of heard towards her father! It just wasnt realistic! Try Again!
I must admit, I didn't like the first chapter. But then I read this one and it was perfect! You captured the characters perfectly, and it was very, very hot!
Unrealistic, if my father raped me i wouldnt totally ditch him just to come back wanting to fuck him more than ever. i liked the first chapter but the sex sucked in the one. it was way too fast and uninteresting. Try something different
I do love incest stories and this one was a very good one not disapointing at all.
what the fuck is this shit?The first chapter was ok,but then your trying to tell us that he savagely rapes his daughter and then she comes back and all of a sudden wants him to fuck her />?im not sold
it was ok it dint flow togetre like "oh daddy im cuming" how unrelistik
this story is unrealistic and quite frankly it disgusted me. I have been raped before and let me tell you. You dont just suddenly change your mind and say oh i really want to fuck them now. But it was a good try. Next time just stick with the incest and leave out the rape
for asking the obvious question, but where is Ch. 1?!
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