That started out so juicy, no pun intended. Why??? Why end it so quickly except to torture your readers. I guess you just identify with that sadistic hero in the story huh? Tease and torture, no mercy. I love it, but I hate it. I will see if any of your other works give a little more mercy than this.
English
Love it
I really loved this story. I could almost feel the intensity.
Overwhelming
All of it pure and true. The need to submit, the need to feel both giving and receiving. Beautiful.
Wow
Pleaseeeee continue!
great
Where will it end? Way too soon!
What the hell man??
That started out so juicy, no pun intended. Why??? Why end it so quickly except to torture your readers. I guess you just identify with that sadistic hero in the story huh? Tease and torture, no mercy. I love it, but I hate it. I will see if any of your other works give a little more mercy than this.
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