by rocketgirl2011
I can't wait to see what happens next to Parker and Carrie as they really get into their roles. Great job!
I liked it the sweetness in the writing, not overbearing he was forceful enough to keep it interesting not over the top. Good job.
your such wonderful writter..stories like yours are the reason i bother coming to this site
what a wonderful beginning for an introduction. shy but smouldering underneath.
Loved it! You're a great writer! I felt like I could see Carrie and Parker. Can't wait to read more!
That was the story I was looking for while wading through most of the stories I have read thus far.
I love it when the hero takes charge of the heroine at least in the bedroom but she is waaaay too meek.
She needs to toughen up just a tad bit because her behavior would become tiresome after awhile.
Great story though can't wait to read more.
Wow, I loved this! Especially the fact that Carrie was waiting for a guy alpha enough to take her. I thought your story was hot. I see you haven't written lately. Any chance of you starting again?
Hot, hot,hot!!!
I know that I will be sharing this site once I am married:>)
Are there any Real Parkers out there???
Great story. I would love to read more about those two. Update please--when you get the chance.
Carrie wanted Parker to find her story because she was too scared to ask him up front! Now where's the rest?
A very nice and HOT tale! A few spelling issues but not enough to slow the reader.