by TexKatie
has been mentioned in today's Author's Hangout New Story Review Thread
I really loved that story. It's different from any other I've ever read. It was so real! The whole time I could actually picture myself w/ my fiance and it was just so real!
Your story was good, and I liked it, up until the conversation started. And then it became great, and I loved it. Sweet, and sensual, and intense. Very, very nice.