All Comments on 'Fun In The Pool'

Excellent story and I can relate, I have an outdoor pool and late night swims are excellent, always swim in the buff and lots of fun happening. Again exellent story

like the setting and circumstance, has a natural beginning. The dialogue is a little too blunt though.

...but when are you going to continue it? I want to see how the story DIDN'T end there!

bad that this story from you is a, "One Of".