All Comments on 'The Perfect Job Ch. 01'

Enjoyed story. tone and perspective. Look forward to more & escalation of story.

I thought this was an original concept, well executed, left me wanting more. Can't wait for one of the guys to get a second interview. Could have drawn out the interview a bit longer. Thoroughness in interviewing potential hires is extremely important. I'd also like to listen in on Isabella's preparatory interviews, and maybe some pre-testing. The concept has loads of potential.

I'm liking the theme already. What woman, who could afford it, wouldn't want at least one male concubine? No emotional attachment, just at her beck and call with none of the typical problems.

This is shaping up to be a very good story and I especially like how you didn't have her hire the first man (or two) that she interviewed.

I'll be watching and waiting for the next chapter to come out and see what happens there.

This woman wants to treat a man like a dog. She acts like a real bitch. Too bad!

Nookiehunter

High quality writing, and an interesting premise. Still, something felt a little off to me. Hard to put my finger on it. Perhaps future chapters will resolve said feelings.

(For the record, 2" across is a VERY thick cock. If you're going to cite exact numbers, it's best to have them be accurate.)

Your off to a great start.

This should be a fun story, particularly with the interview as started.

It will take someone with wit and great intellect to get past the abrasiveness and win her heart in the end.

Look forward to the next chapter.

- unless it becomes a demeaning male bashing story.

I really enjoyed this!

I hope there will be more?

Great work!

Very nice start.

Boyd

What next?

Looking forward to it/them...

Congrats to your editors too.

Their subtle contribution to

the tight writing is great

especially the detailing emerging out of the gender reversal!

For a story that is said to have been edited by three other writers and "polished" this was really pretty rough. It contained way too many grammatical errors -- words omitted from the text, mis-spelled words ("to" instead of "too" for example) and so on. I hope that future chapters are better written. I would give this a "C" grade in my eighth grade English composition class.

I find dominant women a huge turn on. I look forward to the rest!

I like the idea, very hot! I would have to say it could use a little more polishing, but it was engaging and drew me in. Looking forward to reading more.

If this has been edited by your "wonderful friends", they have left many errors in it.