by FluteMaster
Better than most of the trash on this site - BETTER BY A LONG SHOT!
This was great...please continue the story of toby and tina and their developing D/s discovery and relationship!
If I didn't know you better I'd think you were a sub! You really know how to get into the sub's inner thoughts and desires. Another brilliant story!
That is an amazing story and we are priviledged to have you write for all of us. Every time I read it it's like I am there .
This is a gripping tale of awakening sexual desires. I really hope Toby and Tina get together. It would be a real shame if Toby continued to feel guilty and was never brave enough to experiment again (I'm just a sucker for happy endings!).
This was an awesome story..describes how a true sub feels very well... this is exactly how i felt after my first spanking!!
I don't normally read anything in BDSM, but I picked this to sample your work. I think it is incredibly well written and I really found myself feeling what Tina felt. It was a great story!!
I absolutely love the way you write. You have such a good grasp on the emotions and thoughts of the characters, it really makes the story very believable and effective.
I liked this different viewpoint on the subject, this was very interesting to read. I hope she gets together with Toby. I am wondering what Toby did after everyone left...
But so worth the wait. Please no more writers block.