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by Anonymous

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by anonymousreader06/22/07

hahaha

Jackson Hewitt heh. The story was a little too short for my liking, but pretty darn good.

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by Seniorcitizen06/22/07

Loved it.

Great story, original and and very well written. It gave me a good laugh. I agree with the previous comment, it was a little short. I would have liked the character of the loans officer 'fleshed' out a bit. However, well done, it was still worth top marks.

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by Anonymous06/22/07

nice one

I liked this a lot, well written and a tale with a difference. I agree with the others that there is room for some more here, I want to know about Jackson and the blonde girl!!

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by Anonymous11/17/08

Just a comment about the names Revy and Rebecca...

I liked the story...but the names Revy and Rebecca seem to remind of a particular awesome sexy character from Black Lagoon named Revy (Rebecca her true name).

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