This story was unbelievably hot. My hands are still shaking. Keep writing!
i just had to touch myself while reading this
They've never done or talked about anything and all of a sudden he's in her ass? The taboo is the hot part for me, the feeling that it is wrong. The fact that they are related is not enough in itself to make this, or any, story hot. You have talent for writing, but the characters didn't do it for me.
I had to stop and touch myself to an orgasm before i could go on... mind blowing
I was so turned on I couldn't get to the next room to get my vibrator. I turned to the table next to my couch...and ended up with two sharpies up my ass. I came so hard.
is a good story with the sex but what daughter whould volunteer to do this? is dam impossible next make some sense
made me wet as i said, could be developed a bit more - allusions to the daughters sadness ect. was made, but maybe more needed? loved how he forced her to take all of him and i hope to hear how he uses her now, next time he's horny - will she come to his job? will he 'do her' in the night in secret? keep it going!
I just loved that her crying turned Daddy on even more.
I love coercion and force, so being raped by Daddy is the ultimate fantasy for me. It would have been even better if she had fought him and he had raped her. I want him to hurt her, but not for the sake of violence, just that the fucking is rough and hurts her.
Nothing turns me on more than to think that he couldn't help himself and had to fuck her. Before he finished me, I would have stopped fighting and been begging for more.
Mmmmmm. Yummy. Love me some Daddy fucking.
please write more!
mmmmmmmmmmmmmm keep writing your great
continue this story his daughter went to a all girl school lol
I loved the coercion. Hot!
This was amazing.!! I came so hard in my painties. Ssssshhhh. Write more please. :)
Obedient daughter pleasing her father.
This is nothing but rape!!
needs more details, more build-up, more character description. Ass to mouth would have been very nice too.
Dad has just invited a nice infection into his darling girl.
But since this is fantasy I guess we won't worry about the order in which we have our women's offerings. I agree with other posters that the buildup could have taken longer. I like long spicy enticement as much as the eventual sweaty sex. And I agree that the instant submission felt unrealistic, but hey, in later chapters we may find that either she's had a daddy thing going on for a while or that this isn't their first mating. Reading on...
I couldn't finish this shit because it's a rape story, and I despise rapists!
This was definitely hot BUT anal before vaginal is all wrong. I know its fiction but it totally distracted me the rest of the way. :(
MMmmm.. you're such a dirty girl.. Makes my pussy soo fuckin wet.
You're reading an incest story. That's a little contradicting, don't you think? I sure enjoyed it.
WELL I DON'T CARE THE WAY YOU STARTED,WITH ASS FUCKING,I DON'T CARE
IF YOUR A ASS MAN ,,TIT MAN OR A LEG MAN OR A CUNT MAN A MAN WILL ALWAY START OUT WITH THE PUSSY/CUNT ,,,.STICKING IN HER ASS THE FIRST TIME IS ASKING FOR SHIT EVERYWHERE UNLESS YOU LIKE EATTING SHIT YOUR NEXT STORY THINK BEFORE YOU WRITE............................."R"............. .....................
My mom took me and my sister to live away from my dad when i was eleven. When i was fourteen I went to spend holidays with dad. We had an enjoyable time . my dad always treated me good and i loved him more than anything else.When i was sixteen i lost my virginity and i enjoyed sex. I then went to spend another holiday with dad. We slept in the same bed. One night it was raining heavily and we were on the bed with me cuddling up to him. soon he fell asleep and i started to gently play with his nipples and saw his cock starting to rise , i then began to play with it until it got very hard. He opened his eyes and i told him not to worry. he then slid of his boxer shorts and i took of my nightgown. I started to suck his cock then he sucked my pussy. he then gave me one of the best fucks i ever got. We spent the rest of the holiday fucking every day. I kept going for holidays twice a year.
Anal or vaginal first doesn't matter to me and it's never mattered to any of my sexual partners. I haven't fucked THAT many girls in the ass but enough to know not all girls care if it's anal or vaginal first. Best thing is they all loved to feel cum in their ass so there was no need for a condom, which, I hate.
Now, for as for the 'rape' part of the story, I thought it was nicely done. Really though, this wasn't quite 'rape' because it falls more into the category of 'non-consent/reluctance' at first before it turns fully consensual. She clearly enjoyed him fucking her even if it hurt at first, it almost always hurts for a girl their first time. The point is, it was a hot father/daughter incestuous union where he creampied the shit out of her and surely made quite a few cocks hard and pussies wet.
Keep it going, I hope to read and maybe review the other chapters.
i'm not sure if you can take suggestions, but if you do, how about them doing it in the girl's school or the dad's office? that might be so hot ;)
what the fuck man
Yur a fucking pervert!!! You fucked/raped yur own daughter!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm a female. If that was me I would have bit yur cock of and stabbed your heart out
first off, nice short story.
second. mrs anonymous, your reading an incest story. with a clear incest title so you couldnt have misclicked an accidentally read it, which means you are into incest which i might remind you is considered fucked up :) you have your kinks just like the author. so quit judging him when your just as bad. ah, an now one cares what you would do
if this is true you are fortunate indeed
the story could use a bit more build up, but once she agreed the progression was fun to read!
what a good daughter!
Great story. Love the submissive little Suzy. I hope she takes more anal in the future!
one night my dagther come in my badroom whene i was asleep wheth no cloes on. she whok me up sucking my dick.she said she to suck my cum out of my dick,thene for me to put my dick inside her pussy and cum deep in her wet pussy.
great story. My favorites are the ones where the daughter is begging the father to fuck her, but this is by far one of the best father/daughter stories i've watched :)
Dude what the fuck? I seriously hope English is not your first language cause your spelling is embarrassing! Judging by your comment its likely you've never had your little dick sucked by anyone you haven't paid first.
I like this story a lot, wish they were longer chapters though :-) ignore the stupid comments about rape/whatever. They probably read the story got themselves off then had the postcoital guilts and thought some bashing would absolve them. Write on!
Oh i like this very much
iwant a sweet daughter to lick suck fuck
i have enjoyed more than 100 cute little young fresh tight tiny pussies
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okay, that was really bad! Never fuck your daughter!!!!
For god sakes,
but still a hot story
Nope, not even close. Did you even read it at all. She only minded at first with the anal and that did not last. She wanted to make him happy and she really hardly protested. Perhaps alittle reluctance, but not rape. I agree with the commenter who said you feel guilty after getting off to this so you post bitchy comments. Other wise why would you be here, you indulge in your fantasy and then feel shame for it so you curse the writter, get over yourselve or get out of this section.
Wow loved this story, hot as hell. I fingered myself hard to this.
Keep up the good work ;)
Wish this would happen to me
You had me fingering myself before daddy's mouth was on that pussy. Oh I haven't squirted that hard from mastubating in months!! Thank you
Mmmmm, my pussy is dripping, wanna squirt all over daddy's cock.
I finger myself to this story everyone and I love to read it over and over.
i have given enjoyment to many sweet soft smoth young freesh litle cute virgin pussies with redhead pussy lips
golden yellow clitories
honeyfilled pussy holes
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That was a fantastic story. I had a hardon a cat couldn't climb with spurs on reading it !!! Keep up the excellent work !!!
Written by an adolescent for other adolescents.
I skipped over some parts of it.
It was not my cup of tea, I like more build up, more sensuality. The characters had not enough substance, therefore did not give the sense of reality.
But keep on writing, I think you have the potential of something hot.
I loved it all but especially when he fucked her ass and was giving it to her good. I love thinking about being force fucked by my daddy, really gets me wet. I wish more women would write about that.
I'd love to have my cunt used by someone forceful... I'd also love to have my cunt slapped... :p
after reading this my wife and I decided to teach our little girl who just turned 18 yesterday a lesson. she has been walking around the house for weeks now in very skimpy and very revealing clothes, if you can call them clothes. my wife has just bought a 8 "' strap-on that we were going to use on her bi sister but now we have decided to double fuck our just 18 little girl. After today my wife and I may write how it all turned out.
As a woman of 40 I remember my first time with Mom and Dad .
I was 17 and had had a few boyfriends I came home and found Mom and Dad doing it. As I entered the room Dad ask me to join them . I looked at Mom and she said OK . Dad first kissed me and tonged me till I was ready and then he sank in me the head and it went deeper as he moved it, It hurt at first . As Mom watched she keep telling me to relax and the I came as did Daddy. He and I did it several times after that the next 3 years.
I got hotter reading your story about your own dad than I did reading this one, although this one had its hot moments! You should write one of your own stories!
My objection to this story was that, like many others, I was turned off by the "anal" first. Then the Dad takes on her pussy? How disgusting! Another person wrote about causing an infection and she was so right! Why do guys like anal so much when it is so painful for the woman? Maybe that's the point....
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