All Comments on 'David's First Job'

Enjoyable and well written. Keep on the writing so we can keep on reading your excellent stories.

I did read it again - (and again). Good story, Thorilla. I like your work - keep it up (as the actress said to the bishop).

This topic is not something I've read a lot on, but your story was the best by far! You have great style and it definetely got me tingling!

This story definitely makes me want to check out your others!

What a cool story, my intro to the writings of the very talented Thorilla. I can't wait to read the others. It is amazing that English is not her first language - she has a real command of it!