All Comments on 'Daddy and Babygirl Ch. 05'

I like the whole concept of the story. I think perhaps you rushed. This should have been your first draft. then go back and broaden it more. Make it your own work of art each and every paragraph. Good start though. would have loved to have known your visual on the characters.

it was a little bit rushed but I liked it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I have just discovered your stories today and I love them!

The conversations between you and your Daddy could have come straight from our own mouths.

It's really uncanny!