Love your stories.
DAMN YOU HAVE DONE IT AGAIN!!!!!!!!!! YOU ARE A FUCKING FANSTATIC WRITER.... KEEP UP THE AWESOME WORK!!!!! FOREVER AND EVER A FAN FOR LIFE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
OMG once again I AM instantly hooked!! Another amazing story!!!!! I can't wait for more from such an amazing writer. I love your stories and I can't wait for the next chapter. :D
cannot wait to read more.
I love your stories! So a little lick on the crotch when dancing at a party and he's mine? Have to remember that next month for my birthday... hehe
I like your stories, but am only feeling so-so about this one so far. Nate is just coming across to me so far as a typical asshole. The type of guy you regret having sex with later down the road. I'm hoping you might add more romance in the next part of the series.
You got me hooked! Can't wait for the next one.
I find it a bit to immature.
Fabulous start!And this girl seems quite strong, way to go.This should lead to sparkling encounters! Can't wait for the next one!
OMG U have done it again! Where do u get the inspiration for ur stories? I love that u create such powerful female characters. I cant wait til the next chapter. Keep'em coming (literally)..lol
Very nice, simple, and fun. Keep up the good work.
I loved it. Can't wait for the update.
Your story was linked to one of mine, so I thought I'd give it a read. So glad I did! It took me a while to figure out the races of the two people involved, but once I did, it was pure enjoyment. You grabbed me from the beginning and left me satisfied at the end.
...But you are simply one of the best writers on this site. If I were to place bets on who would go on to be successfully published, my money is defintely on you. You get it just right - the perfect mix of a developed, interesting storyline, coupled with believeable, well rounded characters and of course steamy encounters. Your writing really rocks. I may not write, but I SURE as hell can tell real talent from the those other kids playing at it.
create such perfect male characters? I'm in love with ALL of your male characters. They are so sexy.
Give a girl Tequila and all apprehension goes away.
That was sexy as hell!!!
THAT WAS MOUTH WATERING HOT HOT HOT !
GO GIRL, Jamie is off the hook
Good start but Jamie has some ho tendencies!
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