All Comments on 'Nora Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
OOOOO

OOOO I liked this so far, Now I want to know who is behind it, whats going to happen with Nora....OOO Can't wait for the next chapter. I hope it will come quickly lol

bad_girl69bad_girl69almost 16 years ago
OOOOOO

I do like this story so far ;) Very interesting. I cant wait to see where this is going to go.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Storyline has nothing

There is nothing here. I read a paragraph then scanned the rest. If you are going to write, add some sexual events and create a story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Shortness ruined an otherwise great chapter

I definitely like the story so far. However, posting something so short is just downright annoying to the reader. I look forward to the next submission, but if it's the same length I'd rather just wait until you have something more substantial.

melsdadmelsdadalmost 16 years ago
Just when it was getting interesting, lol

Please end our torment, let the next part be a lot longer, please.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Erg!

Just when it gets interesting, you leave us hanging. I surely hope you'll continue because it just isn't fair to the reader.

ellyneiellyneialmost 16 years ago
U kno me love it

But stop teasing and give longer chapters you... YOU TEASE! Keep writing!

BriteaseBriteasealmost 16 years ago
Good start

I read yours after you left a comment about mine.

I really like yours as well.

Awaiting the next chapter with interest

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Excellent!

I loved the feeling of mystery and uncertainty I got when I, as a reader, knew nothing more than Nora did.

Great stuff!

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