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by digdaddyrich02/18/09

A good chance she'll wind up with her throat slit

If her husband has any balls at all, he will kick her slut ass so far out the door she won't find her way back. I would think that he would feel so betrayed, that she would be lucky if she left his house alive after a confession that she was told to do.So the best thing she could do is keep her slut,cum dripping mouth shut and hope that her poor loving and trusting husband never finds out how big of a whore, lowlife slut she really is. Thanks....Rich

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by gyjunkie02/18/09

Makes no sense.

If you are going to do an Abby reply, it needs to be answered in the way or at least close to the way that she would respond. That is what would make it realistic or at least an interesting read. The response you gave is so out of character for her that it turned this story into a piece of crap. If this is the type of writing you intend to do, my advice to you is GIVE IT UP!

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by Vulcan_in_Ohio02/18/09

Maybe you should turn off the comments . . .

Author, you might consider turning off the comments; I think nearly all are very bad. I think you were attempting some sort of satire, but I really think it flopped. The racial theme was so strong, I think Interracial is the better choice for the category. I did not enjoy this whether or not it was supposed to be satire or serious.

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by Ducky702/18/09

Same as the other site

Well, I think you got about the same ZERO score on the other sites this story was released on. SUCKED.

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by Anonymous02/19/09

Pulling our chains!!

100 for you and Bob using every cliche of the stupid selfish wife and the blind ignorant husband and getting people to think that this is a serious attempt at erotic, sensual writing. For god sakes out there, vargas is baiting the cuckold haters and at the same showing how pathetic the cuckold lovers are. This is a win-win story for those who hate this kind of story. This is so bad, its good. Ann Lander! Hey, look again and see the irony and satire, the ridicule of this story is off the top! You go,guy! You could not pick a better genre to razz than this one. Simple49er

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by Anonymous09/09/09

What a load of Crap!

My god,what a load of crap. But slightly entertaining.

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by DWornock09/09/11

It got so bad, I skipped a bunch.

Therefore, 1*.

You do appear to write well. However, you need to write your story so it is believable. That is, tone it down. Extreme is not better.

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