All Comments on 'Vacation Getaway Ch. 05'

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Anonymousalmost 15 years ago

Get an editor

The story line is fine, but with all of the grammatical and spellingerrors, point of view shifts, incorrect word use and inadequate punctuation, it si very hard to read.

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