All Comments on 'Venus Butterfly'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
holy shit

this is one if the better stories I have read lately. great storyy line this gave me such a hard boner so thanks. and keep writing can't wait for the next story.

fregenfregenalmost 14 years ago
Very Intense

You're improving. This is much better than "Headache."<P>

Thanks for sharing.

sirsemegasirsemegaalmost 14 years ago
So Wrong...

but sooo right!

Well done. Hot hot hot story!

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichalmost 14 years ago
A great storyline and well told story

Now all he has to figure out is how is he going to satisfy his sister in law without getting caught.

It could be a good chapter if he brings his wife in for a threesome.

Thanks for the good story

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Hot but...

The story was definitely hot. But you must be a contortionist because from your description of the positions of you and Lori on the love seat, your hands could not climaxed her unless you criss-crossed your arms between and under her legs.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Hot story

Nothing more need be said.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
JustRight!

Awesome short story.

imhaplessimhaplessabout 12 years ago
Really sexy

Very readable and great sex and anticipation. 5 for sure

26thNC26thNCover 4 years ago
Series

One of a series of really bad stories. This may be the worst.

Racerman1969gsRacerman1969gsover 2 years ago

I hate bare pussy stories. That's a fad that;s quickly fading. I like my woman to look like an adult.

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