Try the free LITEROTICA WEBCAMS!

All Comments on 'THIS Doesn't Happen Every Day!'

by trainman2k

Sort by:
Newest FirstOldest First
  • 2 Comments
AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
proof read/edit

Next time proof read of get an editor. What is this junk "mess st the door" shouldn't it be "at" not not "st"?

NamedayNamedayover 13 years ago
hmm

got to love how people critique anonymously, even when they themselves mess up lol.. i rather liked the story.. tho the ending left me questioning

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Login
Post as:
Anonymous
Login
usertrainman2k@trainman2k
21 Stories
12 Followers
I came here in July of 2009 after a buddy recommended Literotica to me. My personal joys are trains, model trains, and of course, sex. And in my opinion, sex is like coffee - it's always good but sometimes it's better than other times! One of the first things I notice on a ...