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Adriano's Creation

bytheravenfox©
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by Anonymous

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by dennisclee10/20/10

Spectacular

Lots of imagination. Not just yours, but the trust you put in the listener to use their own. Very good.

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by drgonzo197910/20/10

I dug it. I liked the voice manipulation that you used, as well as the time gaps. Great listening, especially for the ending.

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by BiBigirl10/20/10

Another Winner

Ravenfox you are a VERY creative person. Keep it up. xoxoxoxox

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by Anonymous10/20/10

Wow!!

Loved this story. The sound effects and music were awesome! You have a wonderful story voice!

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by aleman10/20/10

Dreamy

This may be your best entry yet. Very nice effects.

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by Anonymous10/20/10

Phenomenal

The end really makes it all. This is absolutely fabulous -- Wow! Sound effects, gods, the music was incredible! Perfect choices. This was exquisite.

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by _mal_10/20/10

A Surprising Delight!

I'm not really a fan of non-consent, but I love your work. Your moaning and vocal work really sold the non-consent part for me, making it a sexy, steamy delight to hear :)

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by Tx Tall Tales10/21/10

Well done!

You keep on raising the stakes, your Audio stories are becoming more complex, more creative, more fun. This one was really a new level. I imagine it took quite an effort and thank you for it. Very enjoyable. Good luck in the contest!

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by MarkAR10/21/10

Sublime Bliss

Another master lesson in erotica... Do will really have to wait until January for another installment?

Always...

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by Anonymous10/23/10

i've always loved ur voice & stories.. but i guess this time u have gone a bit far on the effects

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by BigZack6910/27/10

So good

Another hit. I am a fan of Non-consent. Your voice and intonation is great, exquisite and delicious. The added editing and music sound very professional. More MORE M O R E ! ! !

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by Anonymous11/01/10

too much echo

ravenfox - i love your submissions but this one just did not work for me. Looking forward to your next one

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by theravenfox11/02/10

Thank you all for your feedback! I hope that the story intrigues you enough that you're intested in the entire series, which I'm beginning work on now. I think it's going to be really hot AND unique. Thank you for your votes, comments and feedback messages.

@Anons who said too many effects and too much echo. I am experimenting and hope to get things just right. I'm sorry that you didn't enjoy this submission. I will gladly listen to any helpful suggestions you may have. Thank you for your feedback.

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by PurpleMaster11/03/10

One of the best stories on here!

Five stars is truly worthy of the excellent presentation! You guys did a great job with both the story and special effects! It helped me through a lonely night while the wife is away! ;) I am looking for more in the future!

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by sengir_assassin04/13/11

... Awesome!

Holy crap! That was one of the best stories I ever heard!

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by Anonymous06/11/11

holy crap... O_O

I've read/heard a lot of stories on here, but I HAD to give my adulation for this one. We need more fully fleshed-out productions like this. I'm still recovering from the utter stupid that is Twilight, and listening to a story like this that actually has some HORROR aspects to it is really helping. Thank you, and I can't wait to hear more. ;)

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by Anonymous09/11/12

great talent

Love your stories. Very real I'm almost there.
how about a cougar seducing her sons friend.

Kat
katmanduaz@aol.com

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