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by Anonymous

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by tigerjen02/21/11

Reads just like a naughty nursery rhyme, adult-style of course ;) Enjoyed it!

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by UnderYourSpell02/23/11

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Did you google a list of gerunds for stanza five? If you're going to write dirty ditties in rhyming couplets the meter need to be the same throughout

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by tazz31709/02/12

THE NEVER ENDING TAIL

as long as there are participants, TK U MLJ LV NV

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