All Comments on 'My Photo Shoot'

This is one of the best first time encounters I have ever read here. The writing is good and I was highly aroused almost from the beginning. By the end I was totally hard.

What a great story, well written. Had me turned on so much I actually read it out to my flat mate and before half way through we were both hard. We have never seen each others cocks but he fondled and then sucked my raging cock while I read this story again. Do more please.

One suggestion though. Since it's written in the 1st person and there is just the 2 of you in the story, the use if "Jim" and "Jim's" over and over is off-puting. Use "he" and "his." There's no danger of not understanding who you're talking about.

I really enjoyed the story. I was turned on and wished I actually had a guy here with me.