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All Comments on 'Unintentional Seduction of a Friend Ch. 02'

by KristaMorane

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
too confusing

You started this chapter with Cammi talking to Stormy - his wife and hostess of the party.

In Chapter one she was called Debi - later on she refers to Debi again... and then goes in search of Stormy??

all a tad too confusing to follow

KristaMoraneKristaMoraneabout 12 years agoAuthor
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Sorry about that, anonymous, "too confusing". I changed the character names around a few times and didn't edit properly after scan/replace.

Dan and Debi -- married

Cammy -- amorous baby sitter

Stormy -- caterer

Stormy -- (different person) having affair with Dan at work.

You caught some sloppy editing and I will try to be more consistent in the future.

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