All Comments on 'Mary on Her Own Ch. 01'

Readers know Mary has been publicly exposed during daylight, taken to a friend's married brother as a naked home cleaner, then forced to masturbate before a butch-lesbian shop proprietor.

Why assume virginal innocence at this point, totally naked whilst voluntarily exposing sexual availability, albeit only nocturnally thus far, with a lush pubic bush covering moistened presentation of carnal attractions. Evidently Mary would be comfortable stark naked, fully shaven to expose her clitoral desires, regardless of a poorly feigned personal embarrasment? Mary should be gasping for male penetration of either orifice, by now!

Suggest an employment offer for a sexually adventurous Mary, within the 'Adult Film' industry, concluding with bisexual + orgasmic 'DP' experiences with well-hung male partners!

I haven't read your other stories, but I feel this one could stand on its on. It reminds me of one I wrote a couple years ago. I look forward to reading more.

Sorry Barbara, but I just don't see a future like that for Mary. I like to keep my stories more about the exposure then the sex. Sure she'll get aroused, and will give into those desires some times, but I don't see my stories heading in that type of direction.

I'm also trying to keep Mary's bravery low too. I want her to continue to be the embarrassed timid girl for as long as I can. I want this to be a series that I can keep writing in years. Any sudden jumps, and I risk making it so I run out of growth room for her in the future.

Also hetero sex isn't my strong suit when it comes to writing. At most, if Mary becomes sexually involved, it will either be off screen, or she might end up with her friends. Yet at this moment I have no such plans for that. The exposure is far more fun when the 'victim' is 'pure and innocent' =P