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The Lake Monster Ch. 08

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by Anonymous01/21/13

Meant to be a five star

Meant to be a five star.
Sorry web page on phone registered a four instead of a five star rating

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by Anonymous01/24/13

It's safe to say that this is my favorite story on here. Keep up the good work it's very rare to find a story on here with characters that I'm actually interested in.

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by Anonymous01/25/13

Wow, these are hot. Update!!!!!!

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by Anonymous01/27/13

You're doing great!

Love the series, especially since the narrator comes from two different perspectives. Hope it continues!

Just one thought though - Amarisa loves to pleasure the two girls, and I'd bet she might have a genetic trick up her sleeve. Would it be possible that after repeated 'exposure' to her cock, the girls could develop features that would let them spend more time with the mermaid? Maybe gills? Maybe some spurting cocks of their own? Imagine that, them waking up the next day, able to breathe underwater, with dripping aquatic cocks slithered up between their breasts... yum!

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by Anonymous02/01/13

I love this series I can't wait to read more. I really how that Nikki finds a way to be with the mermaid as mates :p

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by Anonymous02/12/13

They're still camping for a while, right?

I just realized that this whole series was based on a weekend camping trip - they're not leaving anytime soon, are they? If so, is there a way for them to stay longer or take the mermaid with them? I'd hate for their futa experiences to end prematurely... at least let the girls temporarily experience what it is like to be a futa mermaid before they depart (or choose to stay with the lake creature...)

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by Anonymous02/21/13

love the story

Just want to say I love the storie and the storie line and content.. but i was wondering is Amariasa a true herm or kinda like a natural tranny a lone the lines of sea hourse.. Is she a reptile or mammal?
I take it she is not a lone. Becoase of the statment of she did not go up stream with the rest to avoid the humans." Ruff translation". Well we all know that this sex filled weekend has to come to a close. But i was wondering they could exsplane to her that they will be back next weekend. Well during the time the are gone some of her sisters come looking for her and she explanes what is going on. They dont baleave her so the all hang around to see for them selves. And well you can see where that can lead to a big orgy.

Futalov10

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by lynnluvr8702/24/13

Great!

Great series, super hot! Would love to see more of the mermaid's world.

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by Anonymous04/08/13

:(

Why did elana do stuff with her :( goshhhh
I wanted nikki to have her all to herself

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