All Comments on 'The Pimp Ch. 01'

I generally like my erotica from the view point I write in; the woman's perspective, but even still, not too damned bad. Keep it "cumming". JL

...more bro cocks. He shoulda pulled her car behind a building nearby, text-messaged a few of his bros, and got a gangbang goin' on the whore. They coulda fucked and DPed her right on the trunk or hood of the car. They coulda fucked her right on the ground, too. She wouldn't care. The problem with these white uppity bee-atches is that they is bold enough to invade a hood and try to cheat a black dude out of some crack, but are too cheap to take on a whole buncha brothers as rightful payments for the goods. She be a tease and needs mega-black cock to cool her pipes down. When they're done with her, dump her off in her own hood...but keep the convertible as a souvenir. Remember she got some free crack and still owes for it. Fair is fair. Some stupid car for crack is profit, and now you're ready for Wall Street and brighter days ahead.

u are a god...i worship u

master

Great start to the story. Thanks