All Comments on 'WVC Ch. 11: The Pool Workout #1'

Christ let the poor boy cum already!!!

I would have strangled each and every one of them by now

I figure by now that this story will pretty much end once he cums. So it's OK if it is drawn out some more. But not too much more.

It would be nice if it continued with his exploits with all these hot women once he's allowed to cum. The coach, the art teacher, the masseuse. And more.

If I were him I woulda needed some kinda reassurances of the benefits of joining the club (like say what happens with actual club members) or said GTFO after all this teasing he has been put through...

This is awesome! I hope you continue for many chapters. I would love to see where this goes. Thanks again!

j

More....SOON!!! want to cum with him.

Why so long in between chapters? If you wrote this story last year why so long?

Some chapters take longer than others ---

This was very erotic writing and the scenario, wonderful.

Getting a bit boring. The tease and denial is pretty much the same, chapter after chapter, excepting the prolonged cunnilingus worship of the whole group of women while bound and blindfolded, which was quite erotic. The excessive abstinence is not healthy, especially combined with repeated doses of Viagra (which a college age male hardly needs in any event). Story needs to make some progress. Lukewarm at this point (only 3 stars for this chapter; good writing but same old, same old).