All Comments on 'Bewitched'

Great story! If continued try to mix up the names a little more, started getting confused with bob and bill towards the end. Thats my only conplaint but the idea is great, its well written and i really enjoyed! More Please!

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I liked it. The chopped up, segmented format took some getting used to but was understandable. It definitely appears to be an intro and while it is a bit scary, I hope the author is thinking about doing a continuation.

But I know about real life getting in the way, and also how a story can get stalled, I've got that problem too. So I'll keep my eye peeled and hope, meanwhile coming back to check other stories by this author.

Good Job, "Loved it"