All Comments on 'Julie Waited Ch. 01'

by the_thinker97

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Dutchgirl82Dutchgirl82over 9 years ago
sparkling eyes

I just clapped my hands and did 'oohh I want the chapter to go on! I want to see!''

So you've got me on a hook, and I hope you are a fast writer.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
It was good but...

In some paragraphs it was a little to worded and I found myself skipping through most of it. It had a good story line to it. I want to read more of it though.

elisebeeelisebeeover 9 years ago
The best I've read in a while

Skillfully written and unique. You definitely have my interest piqued!

zetagirlzetagirlover 9 years ago
interesting

I don't really know where this is heading, but I'm looking forward to chapter two and finding out!

MasterfuljimMasterfuljimover 9 years ago
Very interesting tale

You write her fear and anxiety well, and I loved her besting him.

Be interesting to see where you take this

Shysub412Shysub412over 9 years ago
Loved it

Really well written and I'm intrigued as to what happens next.

I love a sub with Her own mind!!

5 stars.

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