All Comments on 'Silver Moon: Bk. 02 Ch. 04'

Great chapter. Can't wait to see what happens next.

Like the way you keep things moving and interesting.

damn i hate cliff hangers lol

keep it coming

Lovin this

wonder if you could give your vision on how the world is laid out politically and how the countries are laid out love the story so far

You are a patient, you have patience. People are given a drug and are drugged; they are dragged as a past tense of drag or dragging.

You need to be better aware of your spelling and grammar, as this makes a story read and flow better.

Having said this, I greatly enjoy your writing and look forward to reading more.

however, I need another chapter now!!!! I lost you for awhile, but have found you again, and like before, you have not disappointed me.

Keep up the great work.

Yes there are some grammatical errors, but I still enjoyed it

(more than...) 5 Stars

Nicci

to see Dan cut loose. Cans of whoop ass are needed at times. What next.......

and really nice to see the little kitsunes in action. I still want a pair

Your stories just keep getting better. Its great that they are on a free site but I would definitely buy them in a paper format. Keep writing and dont stop.

This really getting to freaking awesome stage. Ty.

Have you tried to get an editor? I can usually follow the story just fine, but the occasions when I cannot are usually due to grammatical errors; I would volunteer my own time, but I'm certain that the same thing which makes me so obsessive about grammar would also render me incapable of actually doing the editing.

(Sometimes I really hate my ADD.)

I love the stories, but it really is more difficult to follow than it could be if you had an editor.

The first place that comes to mind is the Literotica forums.

I am anxiously waiting for the next chapter.

I hope SM-BK2-CH5 will be posted soon as I absolutely adore this story and the wait is driving me more crazy than usual. lol

I am working on it but hit a sort of roadblock with it. I am slowly working past the roadblock and I am really hoping to have the rough draft done by this weekend. Thanks for all the compliments and support. Keep the comments coming on all my stories that you like.

The fact that you are on my favourite authors list is the biggest compliment I can give you! You rock babe!