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Yeah... what they said!

I am still reserving my vote. I will read 1 more chapter but I wont be strung along with no info.

Loved it! Thank you for sharing your stories with us!

A large number of Alaskan residents enjoy being in remote areas. If they are fortunate and find someone to share their dreams with they are very blessed!


Exceptionally well written. Thanks for sharing.


I hate cheaters

You could have saved this

This wasted my time. This is a none story! If you wanted to declare your feelings for this person write a damn note to her!


Great story of some ole'Salts (x-CPO myself).... Forgot to use the infamous name for the red-light are in Pearl; 'Hotel Street'.
I know if I ever win the Lotto (early retirement) I hope to collect it 100% anonymously (like to duck the IRS too, buttt) as my family would have their hands out expecting some, why: they would rationalize since I did not earn it and was just luck they should also get some of the free money, even if they loathed my since I left for the USN in 1973.

Nice to see one sibling got her head screwed on straight.... And really great to see the MCPO enjoying using his skills. And in almost all Military Asian wife marriages "she" rules the roo$t - he only thinks he does.

Yes, sometimes things do go wrong.

Did the previous anonymous not remember that it was only an engagement? Or is he/she as didactic and purblind in real life, not to realise that he/she was being treated to an adult explanation (possibly the word adult is being used in the wrong context, but then I presume sciolism must form a major part of their gene makeup).

Excellent... these chapters have been, the very best part was the last line:



Sasha didn't fall for the slime-bag! I was worried there for a while. Jared never deserved her, acting as disrespectfully as he did. Real love cares about feelings, not just body parts and friction.


Good, Interesting Story

First it could be better with a bit of editing, Second, it is well classified as non-erotic though it could be put in novellas. Third, I liked that Sue's Asian heritage only appeared when his family got back into the story. Fascinating collection of friends that the his father had. No one would help him so he used his son as a scapegoat.

The story starts to be more interesting

Perhaps the chapter should have been a little longer introducing more to the new characters, but if you read the first chapter, you can see quite well.
I think this story should be read with a rather open mind, it is mental control with incest and maybe even a touch of romance, we will see the third chapter.
At the moment, 5 * for you.
I apologize for my English (yet), is not my native language.

So much packed into such a short little story

The emotions, the fear, the relief, the description of an angry abusive man all captured so well. The resolve at the end is calming and peaceful.
Just right.
Once in a while the column of Winners leads to one just like this years after it was submitted. A nice bonus find.


Only the UK cuck loser brigade could find this story to be enjoyable.... Wow, just too pathetic for a score.....

Why can't everyone write like this

No adultery, no cheating, just pure love and admiration. And a family feud. Great writing, I will be reading more of your stories.

A translation is needed

and some way to fill in the gaps.

i.e. what does this mean?
"Doing right by those in pain are your charge."

It looks like this series is going to join all the other almost but not quite stories.

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