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cherries_on_snowover 17 years agoI really like this!
I would maybe rework some places where the images need sharpened (PM me and I'll give further feedback there) but I love much of it including "My lower lip trembles as I imagine the shape
your words made" mmmmm! Lovely. Thank you. This poem was mentioned in New Poems Reviews.
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