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by SirVPL

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erectus123erectus123almost 11 years ago
nice but uneven

"It Buds when Aroused," is excellent

last two stanzas not as well done

SirVPLSirVPLalmost 11 years agoAuthor
ty. I shall edeavo to do better... Have you read SHEARCHING FOR THE SMILE?

Thank you, I shall endeavor to do better.

Please read, SEARCHING FOR THE SMILE?

Ashesh9Ashesh9almost 11 years ago
Clitoretica on

Literotica !!!!

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