All Comments on 'A Delicate Thing'

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Ashesh9Ashesh9almost 11 years ago
Clitoretica on

Literotica !!!!

SirVPLSirVPLalmost 11 years agoAuthor
ty. I shall edeavo to do better... Have you read SHEARCHING FOR THE SMILE?

Thank you, I shall endeavor to do better.

Please read, SEARCHING FOR THE SMILE?

erectus123erectus123almost 11 years ago
nice but uneven

"It Buds when Aroused," is excellent

last two stanzas not as well done

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