All Comments on 'A man who dreams a while'

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LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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Tighter, much better focus on this go round.

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Deam miles.

Once in a while a man dreams of that perfect girl of his dreams ~ throughout the year he continues to optimistically hope she will come to care for him. Lovely!

AmyfriendAmyfriendabout 17 years ago
"Once in every mile...

there is a man who dreams a while. In his heart he prays, the girl in his dreams has happy days.".. Beautiful little poem..thanks.

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