All Comments on 'A Moment'

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LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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Love lasts forever and with it

Doubts as well.

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
After all.

A woman is consumed with self doubt and a bit of loathing for her past mistakes ~ She comforts herself knowing she's loved.

This poignant rendering is sentimental and sad ~ with a delicate seasoning of hope. Well Crafted.

AmyfriendAmyfriendabout 17 years ago
Past mistakes..

claw away at her inner emotions.. as she doubts her own worthiness in her lovers eyes.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

Good try, but ultimatly leaning dangrousely close to the uninspiring zone..

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