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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

Good try, but ultimatly leaning dangrousely close to the uninspiring zone..

AmyfriendAmyfriendover 17 years ago
Past mistakes..

claw away at her inner emotions.. as she doubts her own worthiness in her lovers eyes.

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
After all.

A woman is consumed with self doubt and a bit of loathing for her past mistakes ~ She comforts herself knowing she's loved.

This poignant rendering is sentimental and sad ~ with a delicate seasoning of hope. Well Crafted.

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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Love lasts forever and with it

Doubts as well.

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