All Comments on 'A Seduction in the Dark'

...the way you play with words. Makes me warm all-over.

Beautiful warm imagery that builds a lovely sense of closeness and intimacy. Well done LJ, I love your poems. :)

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"New Poems Reviews"

thanks for the journey (~_*) Art~

So sensual and erotic. Nicely done!

Outstanding, LJ! Erotic, hot, sexy and passionate. Love it. Excellent job rhyming and flowed wonderfully. Most definitely enjoyed. Thanks :)

You did a great job. Nice work, LJ.

in your third and fifth stanza, you didn't rhyme the opposing lines as in all your others. I realize thats nearly immpossible to do, but It did interupt the flow of the poem, as I had to reread all that was before to see if the error was mine or a purposeful move by the writer.

otherwise, the poem is lovely, I like that it's light yet still hot.

You are a fantastic erotic poet LJ!

Again, an undercurrent of joy flows through your words, subtle but unmistakeable. I enjoyed this immensely!

Yummy!