All Comments on 'A Story of the Body'

by BlissMara

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SmuttyandfunSmuttyandfunabout 1 year ago

5 Stars! Wonderfully done. Just so beautifully crafted.

elizalooelizalooabout 1 year ago

Incredible poetry, you immerse your reader in every touch, every moment, every memory. 5 well-deserved *s

Keep setting the bar in this category!

MaydaypilotMaydaypilotabout 1 year ago

Reading this poem is like exploring a lover with my hands. Every reading is new and I get lost in the imagery as I lose myself in the language of touch…and physical response.

A good massage is a wordless conversation, deftly revealed in this poem of carefully chosen words.

Paul4playPaul4playabout 1 year ago

The sensuality of this poem is transcendent!

I have this urge to pull a dusty leather-bound volume from the shelf and make love to it with a slow intimacy of curiosity and familiarity.

Alternatively, turn off the lights and crawl under the covers with my lover of 40 years; a timeless languid lust!

Bn2fBn2fabout 1 year ago

“Alights my pages.”

Chefs kiss.

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Writing is my passion, my solace, my relaxation, and my joy. I enjoy reading others' writings, and watching their processes unfold and transform. We gain skill, breadth, and creative reach in our craft from one another; supporting, coaxing, and encouraging.