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by Crystal_Gem
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Anonymousover 15 years agoEnjoyed
Welcome to Lit, Crystal_Gem.
I enjoyed reading this. Love the contrasting images and that kick at the end.
Nicely done :)
bflagsstover 15 years agogood poem
For me this would of been perfect with a few minor changes in tense and a couple different synonyms. Overall very good.
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