All Comments on 'Am I Happy?'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
TOUCHING

GREAT POEM AND GREAT WAY TO LOOK AT IT ALL

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
courage

Putting on a 'happy face' during good times and bad. Lovely poem.

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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Another piece hinting at the

Pain of aloneness.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
wonderful

wonderful poem very touching and well written

My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Taleover 19 years ago
Wonderful read~

I didn't have a problem reading it at all (honestly) Great writing as always S~

From the mind of the Temple in you!

CarillonCarillonover 19 years ago
A technical note

I find your poetry somewhat difficult to read on screen, and I wonder if this is because you choose not to break it into stanzas. Consider separating the lines a bit -- it might make it easier to read.

Keep writing.

(no therm rating)

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