All Comments on 'Are We Nocturnal?'

Those first two stanzas are fantastic.

Also:

"spanning from history

to hysteria?"

Very original and good read.

....these words very much. Very original and very well-handled.

I enjoyed watching this one grow. I truely liked the word play with this one. Mezmerizing!

I truly enjoy that you write about the universe and this one is just awesome.I especially like the images I got from this part..

Titans in clashed

tectonic tension,

as granite, as gold,

I can just feel the plates a moving as they clashed :) great work!!

...this morning on my first run-through and couldn't think how to comment. I've read it several times, each time finding a new angles, new images. It's intensely erotic and beautifully written. Five.