All Comments on 'Bare, Now and Then'

by 29wordsforsnow

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RiverMayaRiverMayaover 2 years ago

The metaphors are excellent!

MaydaypilotMaydaypilotover 2 years ago

How perfect that this beautiful art publishes on the equinox.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I agree wholeheartedly with RiverMaya. The metaphors made me smile.

Paul4playPaul4playover 2 years ago

Wow!

Poetic artwork and and illustrative words!

Nature’s own seasonal dance with Eros!

29wordsforsnow29wordsforsnowover 2 years agoAuthor

Thank you all for the compliments on this piece. I agree, Maydaypilot, the day Lit's admins chose to publish it: just perfect :)

Anyone who wants to see the puzzle pieces of the illustrations together please go to this post on the forum https://forum.literotica.com/showpost.php?p=93738260&postcount=312

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Amazing... first time I've ever seen anything like this...and the first time I've ever felt sexual about a tree!

tazz317tazz317over 2 years ago
A DIFFERENT WAY TO DESCRIBE THE SEASONS

while living thru them impatiently. TK U MLJ LV NV

PiscatorPiscatorabout 2 years ago

Hi 29, Thanks for sharing. I've highlighted your poem in the New Poem Recommendations thread https://forum.literotica.com/threads/new-poem-recommendations.904458/page-29#post-94869785

of Literotica's Poetry Feedback and Discussion Forum

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

About 50 years ago a beautiful poetess once told me that poems about nature are inevitably poems about sex

Which she added It begs the question if poems about sex are inevitably poem’s about nature

I wish I could remember her name

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Congratulations lovely! Xx

SexualisPhantasiaSexualisPhantasiaover 1 year ago

I love your poetry. And your illustrations

BlissMaraBlissMaraover 1 year ago

How I wish that I could illustrate, as you do! This compilation is incredibly gorgeous, emoting perfect splices of sensuality, words linked with images, guiding the reader through a wonderous cycle of seasons. Absolutely 5 star loveliness!

melimelissamelimelissa8 months ago

Your verses are so clever and well formed

LlehllaLlehlla8 months ago

Love everything about this piece. The drawings, the content, the pacing, the truth that is change.

Thank you for sharing.

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'The world always seems brighter when you've just made something that wasn't there before.' - Neil Gaiman ----- Writing some poetry, and maybe a story, somewhere between light vanilla and dark thorns. Now and then, I throw in illustrations, mostly colored pencils. Somewhere...