Bare, Now and Then

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it's worth waiting for the cherries to become ripe and sweet.
  • September 2021 monthly contest
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Standing unclad, completely bare
throughout the cold I kept you there
for hungry eyes to stop and stare


spring's shift
kicking in
your bud



larcenous looks, crows sit and stare
hesitantly at first, but now laid bare
at the soft white of your underwear


summer's hope
blossoms into
your tips



splendid, emerald green outerwear
envelopes your limbs just everywhere
so lurking crowds might stay and stare


autumn's guests
rave about
your cherry



red with flush, ripe in body, so they dare
picking your lush rhapsody without care
making me blush that I agreed to share


winter came
all the same



you're bare

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LlehllaLlehlla8 months ago

Love everything about this piece. The drawings, the content, the pacing, the truth that is change.

Thank you for sharing.

melimelissamelimelissa8 months ago

Your verses are so clever and well formed

BlissMaraBlissMaraover 1 year ago

How I wish that I could illustrate, as you do! This compilation is incredibly gorgeous, emoting perfect splices of sensuality, words linked with images, guiding the reader through a wonderous cycle of seasons. Absolutely 5 star loveliness!

SexualisPhantasiaSexualisPhantasiaover 1 year ago

I love your poetry. And your illustrations

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Congratulations lovely! Xx

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

About 50 years ago a beautiful poetess once told me that poems about nature are inevitably poems about sex

Which she added It begs the question if poems about sex are inevitably poem’s about nature

I wish I could remember her name

PiscatorPiscatorabout 2 years ago

Hi 29, Thanks for sharing. I've highlighted your poem in the New Poem Recommendations thread https://forum.literotica.com/threads/new-poem-recommendations.904458/page-29#post-94869785

of Literotica's Poetry Feedback and Discussion Forum

tazz317tazz317over 2 years ago
A DIFFERENT WAY TO DESCRIBE THE SEASONS

while living thru them impatiently. TK U MLJ LV NV

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Amazing... first time I've ever seen anything like this...and the first time I've ever felt sexual about a tree!

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