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LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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Just look at all not said ~

A cold climate

A packed pub/bar/tavern

And so much more in images subtly given.

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Smoke.

Last night's smells ~ still lingering...

LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 34,000 poems.

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tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
AN IN THE MORN

the clothes still bare those odors. TK U MLJ LV NV

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