All Comments on 'Beachdrift'

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lobomaolobomaoover 17 years ago
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these scrapbook memories

found bound here in ribbon

almost make me wish

for life I can never have

a warm winter window

from which I can see happiness

oh brave sweet old world

to have such moment in't

NirvanadragonesNirvanadragonesover 17 years ago
Absolute beauty

I'm speechless. Such power, you have, in that poem.

I'm so glad you're back!

cherries_on_snowcherries_on_snowover 17 years ago
This poem

was mentioned in New Poems Reviews on the day of its submission.

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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A pleasant day's outing along the beach though too far from the shore for its surer footing.

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
lovely scene

A soft sunny bright day at the beach ~ languidly enjoying all its pleasures.

Mark2Mark2over 10 years ago
well written

I like the stream of mindfulness

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