All Comments on 'Before the Snow'

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anonamouseanonamouseabout 18 years ago
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My Erotic TrailMy Erotic Trailabout 18 years ago
I listened

I listened twice, I think you drew the poem from a picture or sight? I am unsure of the exact point of the poem? SNOW?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
you got lost in

stringing clever description together, and forgot that the purpose of a poem is to convey meaning.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Visual

Got my attention, visually striking esp with the first stanza

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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A revealing look at a planned ride from D.C.,

Across the Potomac to Crystal City.

{though I always thought the place was rather sterile}

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