All Comments on 'Before the Snow'

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LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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A revealing look at a planned ride from D.C.,

Across the Potomac to Crystal City.

{though I always thought the place was rather sterile}

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Visual

Got my attention, visually striking esp with the first stanza

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
you got lost in

stringing clever description together, and forgot that the purpose of a poem is to convey meaning.

My Erotic TrailMy Erotic Trailabout 18 years ago
I listened

I listened twice, I think you drew the poem from a picture or sight? I am unsure of the exact point of the poem? SNOW?

anonamouseanonamouseabout 18 years ago
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